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Spend Forever Sorry.
Contributed by
GemmaLouiseRose
on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 03:53:40 AM in AEST
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I held you
there were lies, but..
so much truth..
cannot regret enough,
i havent the blood to bleed
to write out in lines
the amount of times ive cried that word.
i am, but will i always be..?
can i withstand more years of this.. more days?
so many lies, but honestly..
so much bloody truth..
i cant spend forever sorry.
as much as i am..
i cant.
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GemmaLouiseRose
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2007-08-14 03:53:40]
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Re: Spend Forever Sorry.
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 04:10:43 AM AEST
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It would seem as though you are going through some terrible internal turmoil. The brevity of this piece hit me very hard. Your last few lines nailed it for me again...
"I can't spend forever sorry.
as much as I am..
I can't"
The pain is palpable,
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: Spend Forever Sorry.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 04:27:21 AM AEST
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very, very honest, emotional write.
i canfeel your sadness, your remorse - yet your inner strength at the end.
very nice.
- Bethani - |
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Re: Spend Forever Sorry.
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by Torn_Thomas on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 08:51:09 AM AEST
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| the amount of unrequited remorse that seethes through this piece is almost overwhelming, however the last three lines seem express self forgiveness. i get the feeling that writing this poem represented a change in your outlook on life. A true expression of emotion.. excellent!! |
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