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The bridge
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 11:39:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I told them that the bridge would collapse soon.
Seventeen people died on that horrible day in June.
Those people would still be alive if I'd been taken seriously before.
They laughed when I told them the bridge wasn't safe but they're not laughing anymore.
When the bridge collapsed, the cars fell in the lake.
Now they wish they had listened when I said that lives were at stake.
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randyjohnson
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Re: The bridge
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 04:24:15 AM AEST (User
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Short to the point and scary,but I find your poem disgusting because of the loss of life it brings to mind. |
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