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YOU TOOK ME!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 08:16:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I saw you staring from across the room,
Though I didn’t understand why.
I returned to you a blushing smile,
For I was extremely shy.
I gathered courage from within,
I never knew I had.
I walked on over to meet you,
And that seemed to make you glad.
Encouraged by your lovely smile,
Which stretched across your face,
I asked if I could sit down,
And you said lets’ split this place.
You took me by the hand,
And pulled me out the door.
I did not know what lay ahead,
But I knew I wanted more.
You led me to a stairway,
Then a room above a store.
You started to undress me,
After your clothes were on the floor.
Then you grabbed my hand and dragged me,
Onto an unkempt bed.
Then you dropped down to your knees,
And I saw the bobbing of your head.
And after you had finished,
You said “now it is your turn.”
Since I had never done that,
I thought it time to learn.
It’s been so many years ago,
Since you came into my world.
But I have always been so thankful,
That I took you as my girl.
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2002-07-29 20:16:09]
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Re: YOU TOOK ME!
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 05:49:38 PM AEST
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PASSIONATE!!!!!!!!!!
LUVLLY.
emy |
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Re: YOU TOOK ME!
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by DoubleS on
Tuesday, 19th July 2011 @ 12:18:32 AM AEST
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| OMG!!!!... This is an amazingly passionate and beautiful poem, keep up the great work... |
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