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The stars
Contributed by
Jay_ne3
on
Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Throw the stars down
let them crash to the earth
let them break
too a million pieces
let them turn to sparkling dust beneath our fingers
lets wade waist deep through broken stars
and find
what we missed before
Copyright ©
Jay_ne3
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2007-08-13 04:05:00]
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Re: The stars
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 09:40:41 AM AEST
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i love finding old poems!
and, i love this particular poem. very beautiful, with a terrific imagery. would've it be just lovely to throw stars?
i love the last line, how you sort of throw a little twist in there.
truly, magnificently, beautiful!
- Bethani - |
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Re: The stars
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by TheDio on
Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 10:52:59 AM AEST
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| hehe that was actually enjoyable |
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Re: The stars
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by patrick247 on
Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 05:57:34 PM AEST
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it sounds pretty.
and thru the diamond structure could be seen,
the last glimmer of hope, that had once been |
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Re: The stars
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by williamdye on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 06:36:28 AM AEST
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| I like it, but what did you miss before? |
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