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Destined Forever To Be Alone
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 01:40:31 PM in AEST
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The sign hangs on the old faded wooden door
Reads to all "No one's home"
Truth is, she's locked inside
Destined forever to be all alone
No company she wants or needs
To have come and pay her a call
She'd rather be with herself these days
Others can't be trusted, no one at all
She's so confused and missing
Her mind is damned near gone
Living in her pitifulness
Destined, forever to be all alone
She wades through her memories
As if lost in an endless clouded maze
Feet caught in twisted wicked chains
She hobbles aimlessly about... for days
They messed with her too much
Gave grief beyond what could be condoned
Ripped her heart and soul to shreds, now she's...
Destined, forever to be all alone
Spring 2007
Laura Howell Horner
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Re: Destined Forever To Be Alone
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by Spike on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 09:47:45 PM AEST
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Sad, but all too familiar. Withdrawal from a world because it is untrustworthy and abusive is a reasonable defence, but not without its price, as you have indicated here. Still, it's an existential truth that we are alone, even in company - we should at least have some say about the company we keep. A most thoughtful poem, with some strong emotions bubbling through.
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Re: Destined Forever To Be Alone
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 11:54:46 PM AEST
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sweetie ... what a torturously forlorn piece of writing. Damn ... it's sad. I don't believe anyone is
ever alone, to be honest though we feel it .. damn, we feel it deeply sometimes. Truth is, I think
we are all connected and that it is a basic human condition to want to reach out and help those who are
hurting, lost or less fortunate than we may be. Granted, there are those without a conscience thought
for the well being of others, but if the situation was grave and we were on an equal playing field, I think
that you'd see more people take up the role of caring and nurturing ...
I feel for this poor soul .. so lost .. so desperate for
just ONE to understand and accept her ... as is.
Wonderfully thought filled piece, sis.
peace and love,
~MG |
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Re: Destined Forever To Be Alone
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 12:29:59 AM AEST
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Hey my sister Laura, this is heartbreaking, i guess all one can do is tell you your worth something still more than you know it just take's plenty of time and perhaps some being alone too make a real decission on what to finally do. hang on my friend, time shall prevail and so will you,
((((peace 2 you and your family))))
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Re: Destined Forever To Be Alone
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by needledancing on
Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 06:16:32 AM AEST
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This is the sadness one feels indeed. Often hard to get out of the darkness we are left standing in.
It can and will happen...time and reflection soon change ones direction.
A wonderful write to reflect the depths we often have to fall in order to regroup ourselves. |
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Re: Destined Forever To Be Alone
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 09:24:28 AM AEST
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Oh I feel ya on this flow
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Re: Destined Forever To Be Alone
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 01:54:25 PM AEST
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Laura my sweet hippie friend I feel ya on this one girl. Such sadness throughout your write. Yes I have felt like this and its such a horrible state to be in. Hang tuff sweet hippie friend I know you will overcome this sad & lonely state. Behind you every step of the way~ Chin up dearest Laura.
love ya girl~
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Re: Destined Forever To Be Alone
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 03:35:11 PM AEST
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Hey Laura,
I decided to look you up. I loved this poem, it just feels so familiar. It is sad, but more than that it's touching.
~Me~ |
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