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TO YOU IN THE DUSTY WINDS
Contributed by
endlesspath
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Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 02:07:58 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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how does one feel after a talk
calmness...
Is this the feel you should want?!
I do beleive:
you feel soft;
gentle
serene
thought
something not in a while
nothing like you expect
its like hands caressing you
its like winds taking you
its like not being lost
like no breatheless nights
like i can breathe again
I can feel again
I can be................... ME!
IM happy
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2007-08-11 14:07:58]
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Re: TO YOU IN THE DUSTY WINDS
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 12:13:20 AM AEST
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all I can say is, that must have been SOME talk! lol
you captured the beauty and emotion of a freedom that
many do not understand or allow others to embrace.
It's beautiful. (Glad to see you so happy! :D)
~Breezy |
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Re: TO YOU IN THE DUSTY WINDS
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by Adreana on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 05:09:27 AM AEST
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Wow. Yeah. Talking helps me get through EVERYTHING. But you captured the feeling so well. Bravo! Thanks for your comments and support. Your honesty means a lot. After all, one can always improve with the help of others' opinions and thoughts.
Peace OUT!!
~Adreana |
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Re: TO YOU IN THE DUSTY WINDS
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 12:36:26 PM AEST
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First off i love this tittle so rustic and earthy sounding. Very lovely flow and deffinately
words and emotions exspressed at there height of sinserity. nicely done most heart warming . . .
Ben |
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Re: TO YOU IN THE DUSTY WINDS
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by zenmind on
Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 08:20:51 AM AEST
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I'm getting the feeling that when you write poems, you write from a very calm, quiet, meditative space within yourself---and from this space, you piece together poems that are very calm and clear, in spite of any intense, overwhelming feelings that you may be experiencing, you speak honestly of uncertainty yet manage to find your way through. You write from a place that ultimately is always steady and secure--a place of wisdom, that knows more than you think it does, and it comes through in your poems. By the way, if I'm not making sense then don't pay attention. I'm of the belief that many times, in other people, what we most often see, is what we see in ourselves, so if I am just projecting my views onto you, then I'm sorry, but I enjoy your work none the less.
be true,
zenmind |
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