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dear brother,study hard!

Contributed by holy on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:57:55 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry

my brother went to high school yesterday,me ?when will i go to baby school?

dear brother,study hard!you had obtained 535 points in this end exam of middle school,how do you feel?however,i know you were not too hard in your school life,ah,i heard that high school studying is very nervous,you will keep stay in school for a longer time,i wonder if you would enjoy it.

yesterday evening,our second aunt came to our home,she told our father to send you some things,certainly,how cannot i stay at home?i was very happy to meet you in your school,aunt told us ,you ate BeiKeMian yesterday noon,as if you didnot enjoy it ,and you discard the remaining food ,it was not a good thing,you should keep a nice habit in your school life,waste is bad ,you know.

ok,i want to tell you ,our mother went shopping with me last day,she bought a solid bowl,i started eat food by myself this afternoon,you know,before,when i ate noodle or rice with bowl,our mother had to hold it for me,haha,today,i was have it with my own hands,i am all eyes to enjoy it ,done it seriously.haha,yes,i just had BeiKeMian too,it was very delicious,i had it well ,and ,in the same time ,i drank some green bean water ,our mother prepared a few quail eggs for me,i used three bowls in the meal,if you dont believe it ,come back and have a look?

when the lunch was ok,i ran to your room to call you for it,you was not there ,our dad said that you are growing up ,and you are going to look for the beautiful world outside,i can meet you on the weekends,oh,what can i say?we must grow up day after day ,i hope i can go to street and baby school alone earlier .

dear brother,what meal did you have for lunch this afternoon?aunt told us that she will take a mat for you today ,did you have a try?besides this,you were enjoying in our air conditioning room in your summer holiday,but the school dont have such treatment ,did you sleep well last night?

Copyright © holy ... [ 2007-08-10 16:57:55]
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