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Venom and Passion
Contributed by
fadingaway
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Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:21:57 AM in AEST
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The poisons dripping from my wrist,
How the hell did it come to this,
The deadly sorrow coursing through my veins,
The cries of tommorow, streams of rain,
Where is the antidote?
Where is the cure?
Why is everything always unsure?
It's the passion that's keeping me alive,
Im living on the love,
Hopping trying to fly,
On the broken wings of a dove,
Falling of the edge,
I knew I was in to deep,
Back upon the ledge,
Again I'm trying to sleep,
The poisons corsing through my veins,
From the angels bite,
I see not reason to avoid the pain,
I have no reason to fight,
But passion has never abandoned me,
And sorrow has never cared,
Because it's waiting you see,
For the one who's never dared,
Through the impossible it kept me going,
Through the improbable it kept me aware,
Through the dark times it saved my soul,
Through everything it was always there,
The poisons corsing through my veins,
From the archangels bite,
I have no reason to avoid the pain,
I have no reason to fight,
It was PASSION that saved my life!
And kept me going another night!
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Re: Venom and Passion
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by shelby on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:31:43 AM AEST
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The passion is allover this write as well.
I cant pick a single part I like the most. This poem in it whole is powerful, strong and pure.
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Re: Venom and Passion
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:39:05 AM AEST
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More than a great write, it's a gem in the way you have expressed your thoughts that i might add, make a hell of a lot of sence . . . nice style also, easy to read and convey to . . .
Ben
thank you also 4 your comment i appreciate it deeply . . . |
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Re: Venom and Passion
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by Adreana on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 06:11:31 AM AEST
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Indeed, where would we be without passion. Without it, all things aristic and meaningful would cease to exist. We would have no reason to live. Awesome write. Bravo!
~Adreana |
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Re: Venom and Passion
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 06:51:33 AM AEST
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very intense and powerful piece of poetry here.. wonderfully penned out.. awesome job
rock on,
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Re: Venom and Passion
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by endlesspath on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 07:24:50 AM AEST
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yes we all need passion but there is the venom bite which sometimes takes away. wonderful post
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Re: Venom and Passion
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by hisprettygirl on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 07:58:26 AM AEST
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what a write. what an analogy. loved it. especially this part:
Through the impossible it kept me going,
Through the improbable it kept me aware,
Through the dark times it saved my soul,
Through everything it was always there,
hisprettygirl
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Re: Venom and Passion
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 11:34:12 PM AEST
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| Very exhilirating poem from start to finish. Good job. |
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