|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
grave calling
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:18:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
The grave calls out my name
bleeding through healed up scars
the sorrow goes deeper as we try to wish
on fallen stars
Parade of life
seems to be ongoining
tears of hurt always flowing
resentment will keep growing
LOST....... in grotesque stories or lies
feed off them.. to plague lives
a million razors scratch out eyes
another bloodshed .... someone dies
rock on ,
vampyress Jenni
Copyright ©
Phantomvampyress
... [
2007-08-10 04:18:23]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by fadingaway on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:56:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
nice....dark, and suductive.
i like it.
|
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:53:06 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Jennitude, I thought you did an excellent job with this write. Sounds like everyday life, huh?
"Rock on", sister.
Peace,
Laura |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 09:17:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is awesome, i felt your descriptions and ouch they hurt. Excellant writting Jenni, truly consistant your style is.
Ben |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 12:36:03 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Holy heck Jenn!!! Where do these come from?
WOW! I'm impressed, hun! Your descriptions are fabulous.
So much pain within this. I love, LOVE the first stanza so much.
It is entirely moving!
Excellent post, hun! ADORE this one
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 10:21:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Dark indeed, Jenni but with much observation of the human condition. A lot of deep material comes in a flash. Thought provoking.
S. |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 11:55:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very seductive in a very deep and dark way. Awesome job. |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 12:39:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
excellent write jenni:)
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 05:15:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Remarkable writing.
Huggs, emy
I also agree with deadheadpoet. Sounds like every day. |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 08:09:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| You do such a fabulous job on these writes.Another enjoyable piece. |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 07:11:17 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Love this. Dark, eerie, and beautiful.
Take care
Christina |
|
|
Re: grave calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:22:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Ok so Im falling in love with your work.
--kevin
the lonely vagabond |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
