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Contrary To Belief . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
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Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:05:11 AM in AEST
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Perfection we are, contrary to beliefe, yet life seem's quite unfair,
robed of ourselves at an early age societie's burden we bare.
How? i ask, in the name of life do we all become who we are?
we're under the gun by twenty one then shiped to the nearest star.
We need to be love'd and excepted to know who we are in advance,
instead all we are is rejected disregaurded and left to chance.
Some one will cut them self today because of what love has done,
then there are those who will go high tech getting off through the
mouth of a gun.
The one who is young the one who is old and of course the one in
between, not to mention the one who come's on here knowing they
won't be seen.
What's to exspect from illusions? that fancy word for a dream, while
our egos suffer contusions as we learn nothing's what it seems.
The lonely the helpless the one's no one want even the homeless have
grown nonshelant.
Ok so your young and very alone and nobody understands or like me
you are old and suddenly told no longer is life in your hands, well in
case you didn't know we're born perfect, but try not to tell any one, you
see there those behind doors that are closed, who would rather you
just played
dumb.
Ben
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Re: Contrary To Belief . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:08:45 AM AEST
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wow this is a very insightful truthspeaking poem here.. very well put together and so much wisdom in this.. of what life can do to you.. beautiful job here.
rock on ,
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Re: Contrary To Belief . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:42:04 AM AEST
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Made me cry, Ben. Your beautiful honesty. Your heart larger than life. (I still think your love with Joan is perfection my friend) Yes, I know, it takes years to perfect some things....somethings just are. You with the wisdom, that I totally respect and have come to love. You're alright, Brother Ben, yes you are. *wink*
Much peace, love and hugs,
Sister Laura |
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Re: Contrary To Belief . . . Ben
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by fadingaway on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:28:55 AM AEST
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There are not alot of instances when you can use perfection and it works. but this is one.
Perfect! |
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Re: Contrary To Belief . . . Ben
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by endlesspath on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 12:51:01 PM AEST
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you nailed it....yes so true to all great wisdom and saddness because your , right.
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Re: Contrary To Belief . . . Ben
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by Adreana on
Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 06:38:01 AM AEST
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| I like your statement about us all, young and old, having downfalls and problems... but we all started out perfect. Life... it's crazy... and we crazy people are it's beautiful product *sigh* Great write! ~Adreana |
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Re: Contrary To Belief . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 09:44:51 AM AEST
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Whole heartedly agree Ben and you for sure nailed it. Really made me think and will be thinking about that mouthful for some time.
Mike |
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Re: Contrary To Belief . . . Ben
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by ATG on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 02:33:51 PM AEST
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| I had to read this twice. Not because of ambiguity. But because i agreed with it. It makes me wonder what influenced you to write this. peace |
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