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sorrows of our world
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 03:59:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Cry for the homeless
cry fro those who lost someone over the years
the sorrowful songs of children who ache to have love
cry for families who can't get along
cry for the sick who can't find a cure
cry for the lonesome
who have no one to go home to
cry for the sinner who doesn't care
cry for the wicked they cannot feel
the world is sad
full of perverts, sorrow and those that are mad
If only the people would take a stand
and lend eachother a helping compassionate hand
Vampyress jenni
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Re: sorrows of our world
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by fadingaway on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:54:34 AM AEST
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And yet another brillint work. great job.
keep writing
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Re: sorrows of our world
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:55:04 AM AEST
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Wonderful sentiments expressed here, Jenni....showing your wonderful heart.
That last line was so right on. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: sorrows of our world
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 09:21:37 AM AEST
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I love your setting for your representation of
your work i like what this says and how it says it and the emotions and the true you that come's through wehen i read your poetry, a certain familiarity you convey, that place i know well if you will. Beautiful work my friend . . .
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Re: sorrows of our world
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by Spike on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 09:42:47 PM AEST
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If only, Jenni. I think this one will resonate with everyone who reads it. A lot of compassion and help does occur though, every single second - and happiness is all over the place. It just doesn't rate in the news like misery and tragedy seem to, and we do seem to forget it ourselves, while holding onto the sad and bad times. I wish I knew why...
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Re: sorrows of our world
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 12:53:16 PM AEST
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beautifully written truthful from the heart poetry,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: sorrows of our world
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by Spike on
Monday, 11th February 2008 @ 11:02:37 PM AEST
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Here, here, goddess. Sing light to the shadows of our selfish and sometimes twisted selves.
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