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You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 12:35:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You
make loving beautiful
you did right from the start,
should you ever be in doubt
look here in my
heart.
Come and see the promise that i made
for you and i, the one that says i'll always love you
till the day i
die.
That special moment that i knew
you were the one for me,
the one that has your name on it for all
eternity.
You make loving beautiful
from all the way inside,
but then with you beautiful
is something hard to
hide.
Yes you
make loving beautiful
the
way it ought to be,
i guess when your an angel
it just comes
naturaly.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 01:03:22 AM AEST
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an amazing beautiful write!! such passion and expression of love and devotion with this.. very well done
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
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by endlesspath on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 01:52:47 AM AEST
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souls searching and loving write. such words to draw one into the heart. liked this piece. i hope someone can and will always do this for me.
endless |
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:12:25 AM AEST
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Perfection, Brother Ben...Simply perfection.
Peace, love and hugs...
Sister Laura *wink* |
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:21:37 AM AEST
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Comforting words of hope to those who wish to find their unconditional love.
Worded beautifully. |
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
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by AirHead on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:59:11 AM AEST
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| You write so beautifully, thank you for sharing |
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 09:48:09 AM AEST
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There you go again Ben. Beautifully awesome qrite. Gotta love this last stanza
Yes you
make loving beautiful
the
way it ought to be,
i guess when your an angel
it just comes
naturaly.
Mike |
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 07:59:30 AM AEST
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written with an extra pinch of sweetness, to the most blessed woman in the world:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben
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by ATG on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 02:29:56 PM AEST
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| This definatley expresses how i have felt in the past. It makes me hope that this isn't a feeling from the past , and that you still have the pleasure of enjoying these feelings. A poem i can relate to. Thankyou. peace |
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