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Blackboard of A Heart
Contributed by
needledancing
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Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 06:35:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The chalk has written words time and again.
The scratching sound an echo in my brain.
The words written strong and bold to board of black.
Passion captured art of love words packed.
The brush erases every word of shame.
T'was love declaring others with its name.
Sublimenting me for far too long.
I hear the music of your misplaced song.
Hearts as hungry as that board for chalk.
Brush in hand from wounding words I walk.
With new compassion to the heart I wear.
Chalk in hand with no desire to share.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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2007-08-09 18:35:55]
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Re: Blackboard of A Heart
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 06:40:20 PM AEST
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Incredible write, I felt this... Hearts as hungry as that board for chalk........ powerful oh yes I feel it.
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Re: Blackboard of A Heart
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by endlesspath on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 10:25:23 PM AEST
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very lovely write. hearts on a chalk board, and the echos of chalk scratching, ..gave me chills, with this write.
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Re: Blackboard of A Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 01:05:25 AM AEST
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wow this is full of expression and heartfelt anger.. i love the flow of this and the wording is just superb.. beautiful write
rock on,
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Re: Blackboard of A Heart
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:16:37 AM AEST
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Wonderful way to vent your anger....(you do it with so much more wiseness than I) *smiles* Great write, sister.
Peace, love and hugs,
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Re: Blackboard of A Heart
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:31:01 AM AEST
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Words well woven together to form the whole.
Nice to read the end result of your thought processes
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Re: Blackboard of A Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 03:21:38 AM AEST
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Such an appropriate metaphor masterfully metered in beautifully penned piece of work.
wabl
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Re: Blackboard of A Heart
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 05:46:03 AM AEST
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Nice, easy yet thought provoking . Wonderful pic too.
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Re: Blackboard of A Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 08:55:58 PM AEST
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Rhyme,rhythm and metaphor.That's poetry.Very nicely vented,indeed,Needle,
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