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Lost in Confusion
Contributed by
airhead
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Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 05:10:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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From what you created
Lost in confusion
I believed in you
Was it just an illusion
I gave you my heart
My soul & my mind
I never doubted once
You’d treat me unkind
What is it you want
What is it you need
I gave you my all
My love grew from a seed
Maybe it’s someone else
That you’ve found
We can’t always be together
Can they just come round?
I don’t know what else I can say
Other than I’m missing you
More and more
Every day
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airhead
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2007-08-09 17:10:41]
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Re: Lost in Confusion
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by endlesspath on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 10:40:54 PM AEST
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sorry your confused and lost. yes, lots of people these days love to hurt.
alot of them do not even see they hurt you.
hope your hurt passes soon.
good write
endless |
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Re: Lost in Confusion
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 03:33:58 AM AEST
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this poem is very clear on the expression of feeling lost and confused without someone who meant something to you.. you have captured that in words very well.. great expression here..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Lost in Confusion
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 06:42:45 AM AEST
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Love is like a shuttle, it leave's you just out of reach of where you thought you were happy
being and then another come's along soon to forget where it was you were in the first place and so you carry on in hopes of finding a better destination . . . A nice style of presentation you have with your work, take care . . .
thank you 4 your comment also . . . much appreciated.
Ben |
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