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Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
Contributed by
doug
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Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:06:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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~Eternal Kingdoms Fallen~
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Castles lying in the mist
Spires crowned in dying ray.
Dusk falling ; silent banners
'neath the giant clouds, they sway
Knights gather 'neath the storm
in rank ; glory in their eyes.
Now they stand defiant forever.
Now they stand , defiantly die
Their blood to save The Raven Queen
( Knights of the Eternal Throne ).
Lo , with pride , she watches now
whilst bravely into hell they go.
Odin , cries the brooding Queen ,
send thy Raven Memory!
See this deed and grant Vahalla
for these ; thy men of bravery!
~The Eternal Kingdoms lie in ruin...
but in Vahalla the brave shall live forever~
Copyright ©
doug
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2007-08-09 09:06:07]
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by endlesspath on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:29:33 AM AEST
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i see the difference in the writes, yet Doug, this is so beautiful..they fight for their queen to the dying end. im lost in this write, with so much vivid scenes crossing through the minds. see the fair queen send her fellow fighters to help proclaim; glory!
endless |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by True on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 10:03:38 AM AEST
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| Clearly you have written the better of the two. I think you understood this piece so much better than I did. Once again an amazing write. |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 05:51:40 PM AEST
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| Very well done. I love the artwork...it does stir the creative mind. |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 01:12:31 AM AEST
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this is awesome.. I like the imagery.. nicely done.
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 12:48:13 AM AEST
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holy heck doug! Tremendously and passionately moving, my friend!
A truly glorious description of bygone kingdoms and brave knights.
though, I think your queen looks to be somewhat indifferent ...
truly a most decorative piece filled with stunning descriptions!
~Breezy |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 04:30:19 AM AEST
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very creative and clever on the both of your parts, i like the idea of seeing what you each came up with:)
this poem is fabulous! i love the whole viking aspect and the whole of it-excellent job!!
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by brew on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 12:47:47 PM AEST
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This was schematic
from a falling princess to fall in feat
Wow
Powerful
Wonderful power write.......yours
Brew~ |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 25th September 2007 @ 09:42:31 PM AEST
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Stunning and powerful descriptions throughout, Doug, a most pleasing read!
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 12:54:24 AM AEST
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wow Doug this writes truely amazing .
lol you did a great job on this . :D |
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 07:38:30 AM AEST
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| Like all your poems, so mysterious, dark, sublime, shadow-like....the poem just sways as in a breeze. Love it. |
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