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Last Things I See
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 04:52:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are the gentle urgings of passion
The softly whispered tones of love
That allows my heart to see
Beauty in everything
You are a woman unlike any other
A woman who inspires, compels
Me to be a man
Makes me desperate to be a man
That I might compliment
Your sublime feminine gracefulness
Might be worthy of your attention
Worthy of your glance
Everything about you is exciting
You fill me with such aching, longing
Such awe of your breathtaking sensuality
That sometimes I feel actual pain
You make me ache all over
Make me wonder if love is a terminal disease
And if I should be
I ask but one thing
As those whispered tones of love
Gentle urgings of passion carry me to heaven
You and your angelic blue eyes
Are the last things I see
Russ
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Re: Last Things I See
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by endlesspath on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:59:55 AM AEST
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lots of passion and love there.one can make the world go around with a certain one is inceriable and worth all time and uncertainy.
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Re: Last Things I See
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:37:50 AM AEST
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Certainly sounds like true inspiration, long may it continue to be so
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Re: Last Things I See
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 05:44:53 AM AEST
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so beautiful russ, excellent ending too, for who wouldnt wish to die in loves arms?
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Last Things I See
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by brew on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 02:42:45 PM AEST
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Wow to have that kind of love~!
Sounds wonderful... Is it real.....and where can I find it? :D
brew~ aka dayna |
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