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My Taboo
Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
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Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 03:21:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Fear of going numb
misunderstood by some
It drives me further than most
Though it deserves no boast
Only thing I feel is pain
Use it to keep me sane
Inflict harm to keep me connected
Leave no part of me neglected
Dark chain shaped bruises cover my pale skin
Showing when my inner masochist gets a win
Bruises fade, but scars stay in place
Reminding me of my personal disgrace
Through pain I jump start my feelings
Which eventually get shut down with life's dealings
Starting the cycle over anew
And restarting my taboo
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2007-08-09 03:21:09]
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Re: My Taboo
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by gribbs on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 02:36:49 AM AEST
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| a conflicting mind longs for an understanding love, in whatever form that it is reavealed...good write... |
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Re: My Taboo
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by phoenix_deathrose on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 04:26:15 PM AEST
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| This really resonates close to home. I really think that you have successfully written down the inner turmoil of someone going through this. There are those who try to do so and simply come across as being whiny or looking for attention...but this piece of art reflects a sense of truth. *applauds* The last two lines in particular caught my attention and left me with a beautiful melancholy overall. |
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