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WORDS OF DECEIT
Contributed by
endlesspath
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Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:17:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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careless whispers given to one
why and how did it all turn to gloom
you lead me to beleive ,there was no other
to much talk and soon to smother
you took the heart i gave to you
spread it apart,then tired to soothe
so now you come with begging words
sorry charlie, they are all a blurr
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Re: WORDS OF DECEIT
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:40:08 PM AEST
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WOW! Bravo endless .. I wish I had your strength! That last line
is something that I wish more could do and maybe the hurt that
some inflict wouldn't be done so carelessly and thoughtlessly.
There is power in your conviction. I especially adore the last five words ...
Hell, yeah!!
~Breezy |
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Re: WORDS OF DECEIT
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 01:48:32 AM AEST
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this is very sad and short but very well expressed. I like the imagery here.. its a poem alot of people who have had their heart broken and moved on can relate to.
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: WORDS OF DECEIT
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by Dom on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 04:23:59 AM AEST
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The brevity of this increases its emotional impact, and wow that ending is powerful!
Great write,
Dom |
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Re: WORDS OF DECEIT
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by True on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 11:36:38 AM AEST
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| well done. I could see you being one of the better writers on this site. |
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Re: WORDS OF DECEIT
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by doug on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:08:18 PM AEST
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This is a painful write.
To close to home for
my comfort this morning.
:) Nevertheless what's
one to do. So sorry you
had to feel this. Know
, however , that you're
not alone. Take care ,
Truly , Doug |
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Re: WORDS OF DECEIT
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by needledancing on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:16:24 AM AEST
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| From one who has had a recent explosion of the heart ,I can read this piece and know I am not the only one who is vulnerable to loves wicked twists and tortures. A solid write that jumped right into my heartspace. |
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Re: WORDS OF DECEIT
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:10:06 AM AEST
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" so now you come with begging words
sorry charlie, they are all a blurr "
This line is awesome reminds of the old contry tune " Good Time Charlie's Got The Blues"
" some gotta win, some gotta loose, yeh good time charlie's got the blues . . .
Love this poem will read more, consider it voted for and 5 stars . . .
thanks for your comment also . . .
Ben
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Re: WORDS OF DECEIT
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by SPOKENWORDARTIST on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:30:22 AM AEST
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great read supreb.
strength is very important keeps us grounded |
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