|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Forever Cursed
Contributed by
fadingaway
on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 04:08:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
I think im gonna be sick and it's your fault,
Forevers always felt like home,
There's something wrong with me,
What is this gift that I have been given,
For when the moon is full,
I change and this curse is driven,
You can not imagine the feeling,
The thrill of the kill,
The raw power and surdge of emotion,
The killer instinct driving me like adrenaline,
When I change noting can stop me,
I am the antichrist!
Looking at my reflection while the blood is dripping from my teeth that have become fangs,
I look at the claws that have replaced my fingernails,
I feel the silky black hair that has covered every inch of my body,
And I feel the ripple of new muscles I have never knew I had,
The scent of the blood is driving me mad,
I can hardly contain myself,
I can hear your hear beat quicker as I approach,
You know something is out there,
But are to scared to go and find out what,
Finally when you do the hair on the back of you neck stands on end,
Just to assure you that something is watching,
I begin to growl low at first and then let myself be consumed by the howl,
As I release the primal rage,
Im lost in the enchantment of blood dancing throught the air,
Devoured buy the urdge as the chunks of flesh fly,
I shutter in extacy as the warm blood runs over my lips,
As my tounge caresses and plays with the crimson that flows down your neck,
I savor the scent and the lust of the kill,
And shutter at the thought of the complete thrill,
I know what the curse is,
Yet do not understand why?
When the sun goes down,
And the moon is full,
I let the lycanthropy take over,
And feast on the unlucky victims one by one,
So to you I'll give this little bit of advice,
You can sit and wait in the dark till you can't see what's eating you,
Or you can run as far and as fast as you can,
Now go......RUN....RUN FOR YOUR LIFE,
Before it gets dark
And before I have the chance to rip your legs out from under you!
Copyright ©
fadingaway
... [
2007-08-08 16:08:47]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Forever Cursed
(User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 10:04:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow , so intense. like someone waiting for a new something to be let in and then not given a chance, no matter what. this is very dark. things are not all bad, even a few people , you know.
endless |
|
|
Re: Forever Cursed
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:32:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is soooo amazing! great imagery, i REALLY like this write.
- Bethani - |
|
|
Re: Forever Cursed
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 01:51:39 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a nicley done dark write.. very good imagery
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
|
|
Re: Forever Cursed
(User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 03:19:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very nice write. Great intensity and wonderful imagery. Well done. |
|
|
Re: Forever Cursed
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 04:55:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Chilling dark, damn Im glad I stopped in for a looksy..... the last stanza chilled me wooooo
Michelle |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
