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Unmasked
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:04:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Fight the cause that bleeds
fill the bill that breathes
Enhance the perfect scene
skip the inbetweens
Trash the tidiness --
Teeter on steadiness
Flake out on yourself
degenerate your health
Excerpt no self-control
dig a deeper hole
Plunge the knife in deep
twist until it seeps
Damage in eternities
cash in molded warranties
Suspend a trying affair
give up if you dare
Choke on all your lies!
I ripped off your disguise
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2007-08-08 11:04:04]
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Re: Unmasked
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by fadingaway on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 03:15:20 PM AEST
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Great write...I like it.
Keep writing
milo
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Re: Unmasked
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 08:26:43 PM AEST
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Good work, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Unmasked
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by endlesspath on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST
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wow..found one who took and then tried to give back only to find a smarter and wiser, being. excellent write.
endless |
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Re: Unmasked
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:31:25 PM AEST
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wow hun! Gut-wrenching!
I have felt such things ... damn. I'm SO glad that you are not going
through this anymore, because it is one of THE worst places to be.
There is a darkness to every situation, I suppose, and it's easy to
stand on the outside and view that. But when you are in the
throws of blackness it's much harder to comprehend the light ...
excellent work, hun. And I'm not just talking about the write .. ;)
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: Unmasked
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 02:01:25 AM AEST
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this is really deep and powerful.. so full of emotion.. beautiful job. I absoluetely love the last stanza beautiful job!!
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Unmasked
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 06:59:39 AM AEST
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Blunt. Sharp. The write sort of made me feel like I was being stabbed with the words. Good job, Scorp. Good to get the crap out....OMG how I love how the words can heal, sister. Great title...great write. To the point.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Unmasked
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 06:21:32 AM AEST
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Well now, I too am certainly glad you are feeling better!
Dark, sharp and bitter. Done with your wonderful flair.
I hope we see more from you soon! |
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Re: Unmasked
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 02:14:15 AM AEST
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(((((((((( Scorperiffic )))))))))
How in the hell did I ever miss this? Wait, I think I know why... but better late than never I suppose. I so much miss the hauntedscorp bite!!!! Maybe I was meant to see this today. I have so much always enjoyed your poems like this. I'd say keep it up but maybe I should say please come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! instead.
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Re: Unmasked
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 07:59:38 PM AEST
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this is a really cool poem, something i
usually don't use to describe them, although
'ouchies' in number six lol, each snippet has a
twist that shows your own writing brilliance, a
beauty!
hugs n' love nessa |
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