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Guns and Porn
Contributed by
spike
on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 10:47:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Along the streets, the lights
and scenery
interspersed with jaded greenery;
so many people look forlorn
against the tide of guns and porn
Guns and porn
and fetish fashion
hijack our deepest passion;
shops display their weapons
of choice—
dildos and hollow points,
heart’s rejoice
Waiting periods always vex;
let’s explore virtual sex!
time to kill in sleazy fun
makes me wanna grab my
gun
consumers divide their sin
between magazines of steel and skin
targets all, big as tanks;
who cares if I’m shooting
blanks
Within these dens of seduction
lie the real weapons of
mass destruction;
it’s an old world
newly born
rubber and ammo,
guns and porn.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2007-08-08 10:47:24]
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:18:32 AM AEST
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Your work is always so refreshing and enlightening, whether it's told with humour or sarcasm (usually both!) This is no exception Spike. I suspect this'll strike a nerve with anyone who reads this piece... Great work.
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by fadingaway on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 03:17:46 PM AEST
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it's got a certain element of humor and irony.
Amazing flow!
keep writing.
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 06:21:33 PM AEST
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Great write Spike! You tread with ease between humourous and more serious undertones. The balance works well.
Its a grim image you paint, but true for so many people.
This has the raw directness that I love about your writing.
Take care,
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by endlesspath on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 12:00:09 AM AEST
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has to agree, it is humourous in many aspects. yet it will hit nerves with some. let them be. i liked it. it was both and gave something to really think about.
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 02:17:54 AM AEST
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this is very amusing but in alot of ways true.. lolz .. i liked the imagery and its very funny lolz
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 07:07:25 AM AEST
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Spike, Spike, Spike....I couldn't help but get this damn smile to stop spreading across my face. Your wit and sarcasm is so refreshing. Guns and Porn, yeah what a combo there. *wonders if I should consider my dildo a weapon* LMAO Sorry, couldn't help myself. Man, you are too much....I totally get your meaning, brother. The world is just crazy...and getting more so everyday.
Good write....as always, my friend.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 07:35:19 AM AEST
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Oh wow! Spke. This might be one needed for the American Coffee House Adventure in Albuquerque! Powerful way to portray two destructive "habits o' mankind." You're writing is always magnificent! Catch ya in a pm.
wabl
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 05:00:05 PM AEST
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Loved the contrast between the two......
guns and porn, yes oh yes our little vices lol.
Love your wit
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 01:40:28 AM AEST
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Which will prove the biggest killer?I think the Romans found that one out,centuries ago.
A little gem to stir the old grey matter. |
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Re: Guns and Porn
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 01:45:28 AM AEST
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Yes,Spike,I know,the Romans didn't have guns(winks)
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