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The Abyss
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 02:03:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkened tunnels they take me
Down to the hell of dark valley
A place of fear , a place of dread
The Abyss is where these tunnels led
Away from goodness, away from faith
With each tortured step my feet doth make
My mind in turmoil, my soul destroyed
I have entered this depressive void
Lost in a space that is cold and dark
My mind in limbo,it is so stark
I am alone, no one to set me free
The abyss it now has a hold on me
I am encaptured, I am in trouble
My mind plays tricks, I am seeing double
My alter ego, and the real me
I can't tell them apart you see
So in the abyss I am imprisoned
Set in blackness, I feel old and wizened
My eyes they stare, in zombie state
As the evil demons plan my fate
They taunt and chide, they victimise
And stare at me with evil eyes
I am at their mercy, I tell you this
I am at the bottom of the deepest abyss
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jerseysue
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2007-08-07 02:03:22]
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Re: The Abyss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 02:12:37 AM AEST
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| I trust that this excellent poem is not written to describe a fit of depression.Top marks from bern. |
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Re: The Abyss
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 02:40:34 AM AEST
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wow, jus think when ya get that low there's only way, up.
Would that be jennik?
Very deep, powerfull, strong write, my friend.
big huggs, luv, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy
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Re: The Abyss
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 02:43:24 AM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful poem!! so darly magically and hits right in the heart.. beautiful job!! i love this.. thanks for including me and writing something for me.. it brightened my day.. lovely job..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: The Abyss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 04:17:08 AM AEST
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Wow, Sue! Yer gittin' this dark side into dang good words. Happy to hear this is a "history" lesson and the author has moooooved on from bad times. Excellent write.
wabl
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Re: The Abyss
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by diba_perfect on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 07:04:23 AM AEST
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| juz awesum... |
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Re: The Abyss
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 01:00:42 AM AEST
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vivid images and truly dark, love your style and flow,
hugs n' love nessa |
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