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ENDLESS WAY
Contributed by
endlesspath
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Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 11:20:23 PM in AEST
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i must find a rendering heart
I'm lost
To find someone to help me
Smile
Laugh
Cry
And or , scream
I am off the beaten path
It becomes an endless path
Leading no where
Is there hope?
Light?
Love?
Or all of the above
If it is, show me the whole
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endlesspath
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2007-08-06 23:20:23]
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Re: ENDLESS WAY
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 11:42:35 PM AEST
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First things first! Welcome to YPDC!! : )
now, this is one heck of a first post. You have touched on an emotion
that humans, feel very deeply, though some would argue they do not.
When alone, it is difficult to find a clear path. Even though there
exist those who seemingly found their own way, they were not
alone. There was always something with them to bring comfort and
peace that helped light the way. Memories, faith, encouraging words...
Your write is powerful and extremely thought provoking.
You shall have your guide ... never fear. The fact that you are
looking for it, speaks volumes to the depth of the insight you
already possess.
Bravo poet!
~Breezy |
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Re: ENDLESS WAY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 12:01:40 AM AEST
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| There was a time when I too felt that which you describe in your poem. Good strong write look forward to more from your talented pen. Greetings from bern |
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Re: ENDLESS WAY
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by doug on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 02:19:36 AM AEST
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Welcome to the site. I hope you
will be here a long time. I loved
your work , I being one who has
lived off the beaten path for too
long. Great writing and best of
luck finding what you're looking
for. Truly , Doug |
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Re: ENDLESS WAY
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by needledancing on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:13:13 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...new talent, new questions, new times ahead to watch you find and write you answers to all you seek.
The more questions asked....the more growth you will know. Wonderful start...look forward to reading more. |
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Re: ENDLESS WAY
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 01:17:50 PM AEST
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Once again i'm in awe at so little you write and yet how meaningful, and no it's not boring least not to me. welcome 2 the site btw . . . keep writting i'll keep reading . . .
Ben
thanks again also 4 your read and comment . . . |
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