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A Fool's Love
Contributed by
funnyface09
on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 08:35:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I never got a chance
I never had the courage
To say what I want to say
To tell what I want you to know
You did not have the time to listen
You did not have the time to read
So here I am alone
Writing this final piece of note
As I wrote the final sentence
I hold back my tears
Not wanting it to drop
Not wanting you to know I cried
But the tears did fall
Right onto the 3 words I long to speak to you
The 3 words that I so wish you know
The 3 words that I only had the courage to write
And I hope someday you’ll remember this fool
Who just wanted you to know “I Love You”
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funnyface09
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2007-08-06 20:35:30]
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Re: A Fool's Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 10:02:34 PM AEST
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| I love you is the most difficult thing for some men to say.It depends a lot on how one was brought up were the parents of the loving kind? I wish you much luck bern. |
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Re: A Fool's Love
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by endlesspath on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 10:18:48 PM AEST
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to have the courage to write those words are superb, but to tell one is incrediable. they have and will miss out. great job.
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Re: A Fool's Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 02:46:00 AM AEST
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wow this is a sad but powerful write.. its hard to muster up the courage at times to let one know of the feelings you carry for them. you have expressed this well.. beautiful job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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