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STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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emystar
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Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 01:29:03 PM in AEST
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/*†* HEALER /*†*
SultryRose's Signatures
OUR SOUL CONNECTION
STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.
He's strong willed, my
bro
Lives for others you know?
he's been thru fire, much
rain
His brethe is weak, so weak.
Lives in so very much, pain.
Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.
He's sick again, lungs still
It pains us to see him this way.
Don't wonna see him leave this hill.
Help him, I tottally pray.
Humbly we put in your hands, Luv
"Cause dotta Jesus in charge, now
So if you take him we'll cry
But we'll see him by-n-by.
Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 02:19:05 PM AEST
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Emy,
I have always enjoyed your "no nonsense"..."from the heart and soul" kind of writing. One feels your strong faith and convictions within your writes, dearest sister.
This was very touching to the heart.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 07:40:25 PM AEST
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| Emy I wish I had just one little part of your faith, this poem is really a prayer. I envy your simple way of putting things .love bern |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 10:51:28 PM AEST
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I agree with laura, emy. Very touching. It's completely lovely.
The words, the emotion, the faith. There is a small sadness,
but I feel a peaceful comfort in this as well.
Beautifully done ~
~Breezy |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by needledancing on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 11:31:17 PM AEST
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| A most touching piece from the heart of a wise and aged soul of wisdom. Fantastic presentation. Warm and comforting to the heart indeed. |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 01:16:26 AM AEST
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I agree with the others
i wish i have your kind of faith.
you did awsome on this
hugs |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 02:48:44 AM AEST
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wow this is a very heart and soul write.. very powerful and beautiful. I love the music and the pic with it. very calming and spiritual.. beautiful job!!
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 04:29:40 AM AEST
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I just wanna add my impression of awesomeness in yer work. Nice job!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 06:25:25 PM AEST
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The strength of your faith and spirit is heartwarming. This is somehow emotional and also beautifully uplifting.
Great write Emy,
Dom |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 11:08:00 AM AEST
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Yes, sad and peaceful at once.
A perfect example too of the strength of your faith. |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 11:43:14 AM AEST
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This is Majesticaly Beautiful emy. Indeed a
warm and touching gesture of love and honor
to two people who couldn't deserve it more my friend, take care . . .
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 08:17:30 AM AEST
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so sad... beautifully written as always:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by TeamJK on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 12:17:32 PM AEST
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This is such a comforting write, Emy. Beautiful as always.
I'm sure my parents are sharing a cup of tea together up there....Hugs
An old friend...
JK2 |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by lost_chadow on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 03:16:50 AM AEST
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| It feels so hopeful and serene to me. It seems as though you've done a lot of growing up. |
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 02:56:10 AM AEST
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| That is so beautiful and also the music, thank you for sharing that I really love it. xxx |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by veenu on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 10:51:10 PM AEST
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| awesome...........write really inspired from ur art thanx for sharing |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by needledancing on
Monday, 22nd October 2007 @ 11:25:41 PM AEST
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| Another piece of your heart shared with strength, love and your unending wisdom. Hugs my friend. |
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Re: STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 03:39:12 PM AEST
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This is bound to be a wonderful book of devotion and family ties. I am looking forward to another entry. You have always seemed strong willed in your writting, hence the title comes as no large surprise.
Nazzy ~ |
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