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Returning
Contributed by
crow
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Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 03:45:23 AM in AEST
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This is when I miss you the most,
thunder rolls far off,
standing at the window.
I think the roar
a mighty engine,
has Me returning"
safely to You.
The ache and the hurry"
call out once more,
Angels are silent
eyes are dust...
This is when I need you the most,
the Earth shakes
the Heavens cry
I am my only chance..
growing weak.
At last the mighty fold their wings
voices of fallen sleep
purest water has not cleansed me
and that light" is the Father of shadows...Vincent
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Re: Returning
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by needledancing on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 07:59:16 AM AEST
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A wonderful piece my friend. It whispers the saddness in your heart and the waiting of her return. I hope the wait will not be long.
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Re: Returning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 08:04:09 AM AEST
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My friend, you'll never fully know the degree to which I understand this ...
There is a deepness and an emptiness inside your words. I see a comfort
and a pain. And it is near impossible to remain unbiased when
it comes to this kind of shared emotion. Exceptionally captured, my
dear poet. The last stanza is incredible!
*warmth and hugs to you*
~Breezy |
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Re: Returning
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 08:17:57 AM AEST
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this is very well expressed you can feel the sadness of missing your daughter.. very well worded.. very nicely done.
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Returning
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by fadingaway on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 08:45:03 AM AEST
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A beautiful write...It only touches on the sadness that you must be feeling. No one can take away the memories and that is what keeps me going through all the rough spots.
I to have had my share of loss and know just how hard losing someone you love can be.
My heart goes out to you my friend.
Keep writing.
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Re: Returning
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 02:12:10 PM AEST
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Oh Vincent...you hooked me right off with those first few lines....god it's as if I could hear the thunder within this write...There is no bond like that of a parent and child. *hugs you tight*
(maybe ya need a little Florida vacation?)
Much peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Returning
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 02:57:47 PM AEST
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Ahh can remember the empty nest sendrome.
I tried to think of one less thing in the house which was less laundry/couldn't ever get passed that but at least less laundry brought me thru the pain. Also brought many memories to warm my heart.
Hang tuff friend, you'll get thru the pain and I'm sure she'll bring back much joy.
Huggs, prayers, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Returning
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by endlesspath on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 10:24:17 PM AEST
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missing someone is a sad thing, but missing apart of you is worse. we all miss from time to time. hope your miss returns with more happiness than ever.
endless |
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Re: Returning
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 01:18:41 AM AEST
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I agree with what everyone is saying.
you did good on this write |
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Re: Returning
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by funnyface09 on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 01:39:45 AM AEST
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thanks for sharing...
is lovely write... |
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Re: Returning
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 03:34:35 AM AEST
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| This is so heartfelt and sad, My daughter is going to University next month, and I will then be on my own too. I cannot imagine how lonely I will feel then. Wonderfully written. Sue x |
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Re: Returning
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 01:46:19 PM AEST
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beautifully written, ahh but so sad..... i hope you see her soon:)
extra big hug n' love nessa |
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