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A worded detection
Contributed by
wordsy
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Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 02:14:42 AM in AEST
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A worded detection
Of quiet reflection
Flows gently through my thoughts
A linguistic line
that runs through my mind
Where rhyme and reason have fought
A well worded weaving
That's often deceiving
In revealing it's one true intent
And we're left asunder
And always to wonder
At the times
and the ways that it lent
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wordsy
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2007-08-06 02:14:42]
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Re: A worded detection
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 03:24:21 AM AEST
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| Well worded, I like it bern |
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Re: A worded detection
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 08:18:08 AM AEST
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wordsy, you have just described every single piece of poetry I've ever
read .... for the first time .. *wink* reading it a second, third
or HUNDREDTH time brings meanings and musing so much closer.
You know, it's often quite difficult to decipher just what the poet had in
mind while he was writing down thoughts. But in reading the words, we
can take what we need, interpret it and apply it to our own satisfaction.
Ultimately, regardless of what the poet meant ... what we take is
what lives and breathes inside us. And helps, (at least helps THIS reader)
become better poets, philosophers, lovers, artists ... humans
okay ... sorry ... blame it on your words. They have definitely caused
this mind to stir in a myriad of thought ... : ) Very well written!!
~Breezy |
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Re: A worded detection
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by fadingaway on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 08:52:20 AM AEST
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An amazing write
Has cought my sight
And to this I feel enclined
Beautifully wrote
A litarary boat
It's words flow like the sea.
Great write flow brilliantly hoping to see more of you're work soon.
keep writing
milo |
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Re: A worded detection
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 04:04:58 PM AEST
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Very beautifull work of art.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A worded detection
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by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 05:20:22 AM AEST
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my favourite line is we're left to asunder and always to wonder. the words in these lines gives me shivers. what flowing lines yet simple and easy. wonderful job. now i see why one creates.
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