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Myth
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 04:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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what spark could illuminate this darkness?
recollection pulls me backward to sweet devotion.
could peace be a myth as great as Atlantis?
Happiness may be hiding under the blue sea...
my guiding light is a small candle-
and this beacon does not fare well in water.
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2007-08-05 16:12:53]
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Re: Myth
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 04:21:50 PM AEST
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GOOD WORK.
HUGGS,
emy |
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Re: Myth
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by Jeff9Man on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 07:04:59 PM AEST
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I like it
It rings well |
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Re: Myth
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by endlesspath on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 10:33:35 PM AEST
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very good write.
i loved the very lead off line.
a spark of illuminate with darkeness
bringing light to help move the dark
great post
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