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YOU ARE MY PROMISED LAND
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 08:12:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You don’t know how much I care.
You pull me through each day.
Just knowing you’ll be waiting,
Keeps me from going astray.
In order to make you happy,
I’d go to any length.
Why do you think I’m in love with you?
It’s you where I get my strength.
I love you girl, I love you.
Let the whole world know it’s true.
If the words I say can’t make you stay,
Then just look into my baby blues.
Sunshine can’t compare to the
Moonlight in your hair.
If you’ll let me take your hand,
It will be my promised land.
Together we’ll jump lifes’ hurdles.
The strength comes to us from above.
Whether we’re hare or turtles,
What we do will be guided by love!
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Robert_Edgar_Burns
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2002-07-29 20:12:14]
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Re: YOU ARE MY PROMISED LAND
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 07:13:35 AM AEST
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I am speachless on why not so many reads on your work! I just enjoy reading them! Like I said post a comment to tell what it's about it helps!
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Re: YOU ARE MY PROMISED LAND
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 02:52:20 PM AEST
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Hello friend,
I don't know how this onw slid by me!!!!
Sorry??????
It's awesome!!!!!
Still your #1 fan!!!!!!!!!
luv,
emy |
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Re: YOU ARE MY PROMISED LAND
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by Charlaxandroidoneseven on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 07:17:17 AM AEST
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If the words I say can’t make you stay,
Then just look into my big brown eye.
HAHAHHA
this is wonderfull
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