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Don't say goodbye!
Contributed by
madhusudan
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Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 03:19:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look away and I smile...
Guess I have cried enough...
And at the end of my life
I tried and I failed
Guess I never got what I wanted...
And at the end of my life
I'm dying and I have lost it
Guess I wanted to hold you hand
And at the end of my life
I still say:
It takes a minute to say hello;
and forever to say goodbye!
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madhusudan
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2007-08-05 03:19:21]
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Re: Don't say goodbye!
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by funnyface09 on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 03:40:18 AM AEST
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yeah,forever to say goodbye...
somehow this word just reminded me of someone...
nice write...thanks for sharing... |
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Re: Don't say goodbye!
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by justme03 on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 03:55:58 AM AEST
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| this is simple yet so not simple. i love it. =] |
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Re: Don't say goodbye!
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 04:43:00 PM AEST
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Very wise writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Don't say goodbye!
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by AirHead on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 07:05:17 AM AEST
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| Another heartfelt write :-) |
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Re: Don't say goodbye!
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by sona on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 12:31:43 PM AEST
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A very heart felt poem
deserve loads of hugs
Kainat |
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