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Walking Away
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 02:47:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I tried to find so many words
Words to describe my feelings right now
But I couldn’t find even one single word
To tell how sad I am feeling right now
Walking away from you
You who have took my heart away
Walking away from crying
Tears that is flowing inside my heart
Walking away from feeling
Feelings I had the first time I saw you
Walking away from falling
Falling in love with you
As the sun rises again the next morning
I know life still goes on
And I need to go on with my life
A life that I once hoped you will be in it
A life where the best memories of you are kept deep down inside my heart
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funnyface09
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2007-08-05 02:47:41]
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Re: Walking Away
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by madhusudan on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 03:21:58 AM AEST
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| I don't really know in what intention you wrote this poem but this is a beautiful piece of poetry...hard and touching! |
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Re: Walking Away
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by justme03 on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 03:59:44 AM AEST
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| I'm glad writing this made you feel better. I love the feeling the last line of a poem makes me feel, when reading it or writing it. I too have had to walk away from a love before. |
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Re: Walking Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 05:41:37 AM AEST
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wow such compelling sad moving emotion and heart into this poem.. its beautifully sad.. but things will look up. I also love the wording.. it fits perfectly.. wonderful job here!
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Walking Away
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by Ceres on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 06:27:08 AM AEST
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| its beautiful... you can feel the emotions in the words so clearly... wonderful piece and i'm glad finishing it made you feel better =) |
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Re: Walking Away
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 04:57:39 PM AEST
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Wow,
this write is a mansterpeice.
I too luv that last line.
A life where the best memories of you are kept deep down inside my heart
great work.
Huggs, emy |
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