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His final breath
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 12:38:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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On one terrifying day in Vietnam my friend was shot.
Most people would've been afraid to die but he was not.
I held him as he took his final breath.
It broke my heart to witness his death.
Before he died, he asked me to look after his wife and kids.
When I came home, that's exactly what I did.
I've given his family moral support over the years.
I've comforted them every time they've shed their tears.
I'm not sure if a broken heart can ever fully mend.
They lost a great father and husband and I lost my best friend.
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randyjohnson
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2007-08-05 00:38:28]
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Re: His final breath
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 05:20:57 PM AEST
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Your writing shows that you can relate in many ways, friend.
good work.
big huggs,
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Re: His final breath
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by holy on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 05:20:28 AM AEST
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Great done!
This poem is short but special. It show that you are very kind and friendly, you are really great to keep such a wonderful thing in your mind and doing so good.
I think that you are the right person that your friends have. I am very moved! |
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