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A Dreamer Burning
Contributed by
doug
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Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 04:06:37 AM in AEST
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_________________________
I'm a poet of profound desire
floating higher
with a choir of angels
singing my tune ,
when the moon
is but a heartbeat away......
and dreams rushing through diamond skies
eyes afire stare like starlight
all night , everyday
dreamin' dreams... alas they fade
though at last when eyes will close forever
let them know the skies were severed
by the blazing path I've left behind...
A Dreamer Burning
_________________________
~***~
Copyright ©
doug
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2007-08-04 04:06:37]
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 04:10:54 AM AEST
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wow this is amazing and gives the reader and the world hope to carry one.. to keep dreams close and to reach for them.. awesome write
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 04:57:49 AM AEST
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| An amazing piece of work...that shows such a passion for what you do best....dance the words of the poet song. |
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 05:35:49 AM AEST
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Doug...this was a truly lovely write. You can tell it was written from your soul. It felt dreamy and fresh....
"A Dreamer Burning"...I like that. Thank you for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 02:31:15 PM AEST
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Gorgeous and stunning through and through and WHAT a message
dear poet!! Damn, I'm with laura. I LOVE "a Dreamer Burning".
Could anything be more poetic?? ... a poet's passion ON FIRE!
SO inspiring!
May we all be aflame in our deepest dreams ....
~Breezy :) |
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by Dom on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 09:17:42 PM AEST
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Doug this is wonderful! There are so many words to describe this: passionate, hopeful, daring, heartfelt, beautiful, the list goes on!
This is like seeing sparks of a soul blazing on the page, inspiring and amazing.
I really loved this write!
Dom |
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 10:55:51 PM AEST
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It's a great attitude and outlook to have on life.
Here's hoping that you manage to achieve all that you wish to
Steve |
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by True on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 02:15:31 AM AEST
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| wow!!! This is passionate in a different way than the rest of your poems. This has no air of shadows about it, it is all pure energetic joy and excitement. I love the second stanza!!! |
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by endlesspath on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 11:45:00 PM AEST
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now i could dream in that one. what passion,brings smiles and hope. you answered my write with this post. very lovely
endless |
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Re: A Dreamer Burning
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by theeman on
Tuesday, 10th July 2012 @ 07:24:56 AM AEST
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| I think you are too modest about your first poem. i think its a masterpiece :-D |
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