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R.S.O
Contributed by
ichiban_girl
on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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we talk we share we laugh we cry
you are my friend, and i don't know why
we've shared our lives for some time
day after day, wishing you were mine
that day has finally come around
but i sit here saying not a sound
you look at me and tell me of your day
i stare in your eyes not knowing what to say
you tell me that you wish i could see
i whisper, you two weren't meant to be
there aren't any words to desvribe how i feel about you
but there just isn't anything that i can do
i can't say i love you 'cause our friendship might get torn
i say it anyway despite of the risk of getting scorn
"I love you" i say you look at me with suprise
you grab my hand and look in my eyes
i smiled you smiled we smiled
and for a second my heart went wild
you touched my face and kissed me with passion
there was so much passion
and now we are as one
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2003-03-03 05:00:00]
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Re: R.S.O
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 05:09:39 AM AEST
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| This is great! It really made me smile .. you're so lucky :))) |
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Re: R.S.O
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 12:52:16 PM AEST
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Wow... this made me feel... passionate... lol. Great job, I could really feel the emotion at the end.
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: R.S.O
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 09:07:58 PM AEST
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what a great write awesome , i felt this ...way to go
peace be your journey
Terry |
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Re: R.S.O
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by TundraHydra on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 09:39:50 PM AEST
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| brought a smile to my dour face. great write |
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