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lovely baby
Contributed by
holy
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Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 02:11:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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lovely baby
it was rainy today
i was playing with my daughter in our way
she is 15 years younger than my son
she was born on feb 20 ,2006
lovely baby
my heart my dream
she can run now
and she can call
she call mom dad and brother so loud
she like call her grandmother and grandfather on the phone
lovely daughter
my love my hope
lovely baby
my love my world
she like watching tv and playing go out
she bring me happiness and pleasures
make my life beautiful more and more
do you believe
she will be 30 years old when i am 70 years old
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Re: lovely baby
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 02:20:02 AM AEST
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| I wish you a long and happy life with your children. Your English is perfectly good to read I had no difficulties smiles from bern |
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Re: lovely baby
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by holy on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 02:33:58 AM AEST
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bshaw:
thank you very much,nice to meet you. |
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Re: lovely baby
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 11:19:48 AM AEST
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Oh You!
This is a very beautiful tribute to your daughter. May the two of you find much happiness.
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Re: lovely baby
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by brew on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 12:29:57 PM AEST
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such feeling for your kiddos..(children) I liked your write, it wasnt a bad one/lil on the grammer side of stuff......but hey no one is perfect......I cant type.....lol
beautiful write.
brew~ |
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