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FALL
Contributed by
drowningheart
on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 12:14:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The morning lingering air
chilled, damped, however their.
Crisp as autumn's breeze,
nestling the falling leaves
into a collage.
A foliage of
rusted prints that lay, a top
the moisten prairie.
Blows the wind of October.
The branches bare stand still,
erect to feel the naked wind, of
Fall.
Copyright ©
drowningheart
... [
2007-08-03 00:14:18]
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Re: FALL
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 02:23:34 AM AEST
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| good work thanks from bern |
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Re: FALL
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 02:05:39 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Simply beautiful...there is so much magic in the Autumn time.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: FALL
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 01:00:32 AM AEST
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Eloquent in its brevity.
Words well chosen, scene well painted.
Great work
Steve |
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