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Promise

Contributed by janice on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 11:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

We’ve been together for a long time,
You told me, I am yours and you are mine,
We’ve spent every single day being together,
We promised each other that our love will be forever,

You said you hate it when you see me cry,
You said “I want to be with you until I die”,
You said every “I Love You” came from your heart,
You won’t stop loving me, you won’t get tired,

But as days gone by every night I cry,
I wait for you as minutes fly by,
The moment I woke up, you weren’t there,
In my heart I ask you…
“Do you really love me, do you really care?”

I’ve been looking for you, calling you,
I went to your house but you’re not there too,
You didn’t left any note informing me where you are,
I was so concerned, I think of you every minute, every hour,

One day while walking down town,
I walked in the church, and saw a girl in a gown,
There’s a wedding going on, I didn’t know,
I sat there as petals of roses started to flow,

I just watched the bride as I was sitting there,
And I was so surprised that you were there,
I wanted to get near you but I just stood up,
The wind, my heart, I felt like it stopped,

“You may now kiss the bride” the priest said,
In that time, I think I departed,
The girl you kissed in front of the altar wasn’t me,
But somehow, I just pray it was me,

That day, you called and told me you we’re sorry,
You didn’t leave a note to inform me,
That you’re on a business trip in China,
And you said you just arrived from Malaysia,

I told you I just saw you,
In front of another girl promising “I do”,
I told you I don’t believe you’d hurt me like this,
But I assure, something about you I will miss,

I told you someday she’ll find out about us,
But now, our love will no longer be love, but dust,
I don’t hate you, I just hate some things that you do,
I’ll say goodbye now, hope she’ll find true love from you,

Yes I was hurt and felt so bad,
And it’s not worth it just because of him, I would feel sad,
I tried my best loving him with all of my heart,
But I think my best wasn’t good enough,
So I think I should go back from the start,

Let’s just say nothing happened and I don’t know him at all,
For an unintelligent guy like him my tears won’t fall,
I gave my best and I think he did not,
But then I was the one who got hurt, who struggled and who fought,

I told myself I’ve got to move on,
I won’t be alone, night, morning or dawn,
I’ll find a guy much better than you,
Who’ll never promise, but in actions I know he’ll always do.

Copyright Â© janice ... [ 2007-08-02 23:10:11]
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Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 11:12:13 PM AEST
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a very touching piece... nicely done!

wiz

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