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You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 08:44:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You
are my reflection
the shaddow of my
soul,
my heart's but one direction
of a vision to
behold.
You
are a mirror immage
of all that is
devine,
the
inner key
that open's me
posessing all that's
mine.
In
us i find a closeness
that's more than just a bond,
two hearts together flowing
like a ripple in a
pond.
You
are my reflection
another part of me,
your
living proof of love's perfection
as it was meant to
be.
Ben
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 10:56:21 AM AEST
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very lovely devoted write as always! its good to see such love and dedication these days.
rock on,
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 11:53:09 AM AEST
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yeah this is so true.
I love reading this it was a good poem. |
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:02:30 PM AEST
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Brother Ben....Another lovely write. You know I love them all Ben...but these lines really captured me...
"In
us i find a closeness
that's more than just a bond,
two hearts together flowing
like a ripple in a
pond"
"like a ripple in a pond" made me thing of the song Ripple by the Grateful Dead. Loved this write, my friend. Absolutely beautiful.
Peace, love and hugs,
Sister Laura |
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 01:27:44 PM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 05:30:45 AM AEST
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Ben, your words are ever flowing, I wish I could write again.
Mike |
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 03:44:43 PM AEST
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Dear friend Ben~
Your words are a comfort and bring joy to my heart. Lovely, gentle and ever so beautiful. No one writes them like you do.
In
us i find a closeness
that's more than just a bond,
two hearts together flowing
like a ripple in a
pond.
Enjoyable and heart warming as always.
Never put down your pen my dear friend. You are truly gifted. Thank you~
love n hugs your fan/friend,
dreamer
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 06:34:29 PM AEST
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A lovely dedication write, your words are heartwarming and romantic as always.
Beautiful images also,
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by mazeof_darkness on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 07:37:21 PM AEST
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| You are a wonder with words! I love this just as I do all your other writes! |
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 08:02:55 AM AEST
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awww!! so sweet and so true, too, give her a hug from me for as your inspiration she is so dear and special to us too, for your poetry is beloved:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: You Are My Reflection . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 06:48:02 AM AEST
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| Very rhythmic, sweet and romantic............nice! |
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