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Our Neverending Love
Contributed by
OneLastTime
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Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 01:10:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Every bone in my body hurts,
But still I feel so numb,
Numb of all emotions,
Trying to open my mouth,
Trying to breathe in.
My heart is gone,
I can't stand up,
I can't move,
can't breathe,
Left here alone,
With 20 candles on the cake,
Left here alone,
With a promise I can't break,
Trying to open my eyes,
Trying to reach you,
But you're too far gone..
I feel so alone…
I can't stand up,
I can't move,
I can't breathe,
I don't wanna live.
Too weak to breathe,
I'm too weak to move,
There's no way I can stand,
See,this,
It has to end.
The promise I made I shall never forsake,
Because, our love,
Our love was real,
That's why I feel this ache.
My heart stopped beating,
My eyes are closed.
The pain is gone.
I think I'm not alone.
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2007-08-02 01:10:43]
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Re: Our Neverending Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 03:33:31 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem.. its very powerful and well expressed.. beautiful write
rock on,
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Re: Our Neverending Love
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 04:16:58 AM AEST
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| quite sad, but yet not too soppy. good work |
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Re: Our Neverending Love
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 11:57:26 AM AEST
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very sad poem/
I enjoy reading this.
and this is so true. |
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Re: Our Neverending Love
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by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 12:41:35 AM AEST
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hurt for love. not fair when one pledges their love yet makes it feel as a chore. love should be happy yet still have a few flaws involved. good write
endless |
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