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Despair.
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 08:16:03 PM in AEST
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Unreliability
These people you took in
The damage you sustain
From starting over again
The long dive down
To the place you call home
To stop and lick
The wounds to the bone
Your recovery
A notion that's lost
In the neverending
Burdens and costs
Of the drawn out battle
The constant influx
The things that consume you
Distasteful reflux
Drowning in sorrow
And choking on spite
Keep struggling for
What'd make it right
Finding nothing but nothing
Trying not to give up
Useless positive spin
On this empty cup
Despair.
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2007-08-01 20:16:03]
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Re: Despair.
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by madhusudan on
Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 09:30:20 PM AEST
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you know...this piece...it reminds me of the voiceover from those of fight club the movie...dont know why...very interesting piece...love to read more of these....
carry on poet!
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Re: Despair.
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 04:28:55 AM AEST
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| good write, it's nicely put together |
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Re: Despair.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 06:43:46 AM AEST
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It definately suits the title!
I think you've captured despair and then some.
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