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Do you care...?
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 12:58:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No real reasons…
Just good-bye
I’m left alone
To wonder why
I ask… I plead…
I get no response
I miss you…
Do you notice…?
Do you care…?
Give me closure
Give me peace
Give me something to hold onto…
When will this end?
This pain…
Not soon enough…
Please come back to me
I need someone to love…
I need you…
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
... [
2007-08-01 12:58:58]
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Re: Do you care...?
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by TheLostPuppet on
Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 07:20:53 PM AEST
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I can feel the sadness in it..
Good job. Keep it up.
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Re: Do you care...?
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by SoftHeartedAB on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:31:26 AM AEST
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| I feel the true sadness inside this, nice job, i love the struggle of wanting to feel the love that layes within a persons heart. |
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Re: Do you care...?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:52:52 AM AEST
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Oh dear holder .. there is pain on top of pain here.
This is dark emotion .. truly dark. The shortness of your lines
emphasize the desperation of the voice. It is unbearably sad.
Like tears that cannot dry.
There is a hell within this that scares me. Mostly, because
I have known this emotion .. it has been my unwelcome guest
a time or two. I'm sorry that it has invaded your space, my
friend.
~Breezy
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Re: Do you care...?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 02:03:25 AM AEST
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A terrible, terrible thing to do to someone...no explinations. The unfinished incompleteness of it all is brought out by the shortness of your lines.
Great pain here. I hope you can move on...keep writing it out. |
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Re: Do you care...?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 03:01:21 AM AEST
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| Very powerful and sad in such a short writing... Sorry for the person that did this to you. You deserve so much better!!! |
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Re: Do you care...?
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by OneLastTime on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 01:34:30 AM AEST
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| I really liked this poem..it's really emotional! |
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Re: Do you care...?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 05:54:08 PM AEST
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| now you know how i feel.... |
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