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Must be the Hummer

Contributed by reprobate on Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 03:56:25 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

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there you are all preened, primped and proud
a gift to the universe, yeah, more than allowed
but have you looked at who you are recently
a truly complete check examining you decently

the people you were on the way to becoming you
were they who you thought you wanted or knew
did you get here with all morals or values intact
or did you just have to abandon any class or tact

i'm not asking because of your claim i should care
nor checking to see what it was that put you there
for caring, i truly don't - your world doesn't matter
and checking won't pay my bills or make me fatter

it seems we have to tolerate you almost every day
and dealing with your ignorance leaves much to say
so look at you and who you think you claim to be
that person is just a stupid ass to people like me

you may want to reevaluate and take better stock
on your blissful way through life to that final rock
those faces of you for all the people of the street
should be of a person that even you'd like to meet

Copyright © reprobate ... [ 2007-08-01 03:56:25]
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Re: Must be the Hummer (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 12:05:01 PM AEST
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Liked the title. *smiles* Good write with much depth...much feeling. I can understand where you're coming from.....sometimes folks are just "bent", ya know, and you wonder what the hell happened to them...why are they so damn different in how they see things in the world. Sometimes my fellow brothers and sisters disappoint me. Looks like this "minister" disappointed more than a few folks. How sad.
Peace,
Laura

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