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Proverb
Contributed by
crow
on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 03:22:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The words float across
cocktail glasses
misplaced silver
dropping from edges.
A proverb" tracing itself
through each Sentinel
properly thought out
passed along.
"A secret in life
is to find something lasting"
Coal black eyes
could not cry..
wives holding breath..
arrangements lie
so close to a surface...
I am afraid..I think I have. Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2007-07-31 03:22:58]
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Re: Proverb
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 04:07:16 AM AEST
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I dont know if it is because I am tired ...but will need explaination on this one my friend
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Re: Proverb
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 05:38:46 AM AEST
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this is a very creative well penned out poem here.. I like the flow and wording.. im not exactly sure the messege on this one but it seems like you have hidden feelings for someone and they are surfacing?? but if not its still a really well written poem.
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Proverb
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by CoalMinersWife on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 08:53:17 AM AEST
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| Excellent write Got a nice flow to it |
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Re: Proverb
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by brew on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 12:44:10 PM AEST
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hmmmmmmm putting feelings to ones not knowledgment? Am I right, or way off....it sounded as if there was, and maybe is,,or maybe wished.....there was. Ok im young, I dont know.thats my philosophy!!!!!
Wonderful write tho.so if it is...why not tell em?????HMMMMMMMMM
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Re: Proverb
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 03:06:48 PM AEST
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Vincent .. so obscure you are, you devlish poet!
Your descriptions, as usual are so perfect, my friend. And
there is a lovely message floating around your words.
Proverbs are undoubtedly wise ... as are you, dear poet.
Movies are for watching, life is for LIVING!!! :)
wonderfully thought provoking write.
~Breezy |
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