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I gave you my heart
Contributed by
syenn0512
on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 12:40:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I gave you my heart
It flourished into a real beauty
I was the happiest girl alive
You made my heart stop
You were my fresh air in the morning
Your daily morning kisses made my cheeks glow
The smell of your after shave made my heart flutters
We strolled down the street hand in hand
My face lighted up with a broad divine smile
I laughed endlessly at your joke
We shared a double scoop chocolate ice cream
We talked how fate brought us together
I was on cloud 9 when your fingers ran through my hair
Every word you said I kept them in my heart
I felt secure and full of warmness when you hold me
For once I felt that I belong
I cherished the chats we had while watching the sun sets
I was glowing, I found happiness, and I was in love
But you changed it
I felt bitter, I cried, I felt numb and
Worst of all I no longer have the strength to love again
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2007-07-31 00:40:11]
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Re: I gave you my heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 02:57:23 AM AEST
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this is a very sad well expressed poem.. however don't give up on love because everything happens for a reason.. you will know later on why this didn't work out. I can relate to this in my past but i've moved forward.. keep the hope and don't let this drag you down.. beautifully sad write though.. hang in there, things get better
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: I gave you my heart
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by anangel_1593 on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 03:26:14 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this quite a bit
I think many will find it easy to imagine the settings and the classic scenario. To love and lose is common, but to lose and rise again and where the true power lies. Keep on keeping on, and mostly, KEEP ON WRITING!
good job
Lotsa love
*ana* |
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Re: I gave you my heart
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by CoalMinersWife on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 09:01:45 AM AEST
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Aww very sad but dont give up on love as of yet.
Don't go looking fer love Better yet Let love find you..... Sad but nicely written |
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Re: I gave you my heart
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by Sexygirl on
Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 10:05:21 AM AEST
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Why so sad..... but I do understand....
This is a good write....keep those words flowing.... |
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