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Torn
Contributed by
DarkCloud
on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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my thoughts
all I have
never was
all I was
never knew
all I knew
confussion
dream like
surreal
pictures
pieces
of my thoughts
all I have
all I am
all I know
I can be
taken
torn
from me
Copyright ©
DarkCloud
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2003-03-02 22:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 12:01:34 AM AEST (User
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Interesting write, DarkCloud... I like the style..
Welcome to YPDC!!!!
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Re: Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by riverofwords on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 01:18:39 AM AEST (User
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good write welcome to ypdc
peace be your journey
terry
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