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Invisioned Happiness
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 04:40:37 PM in AEST
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Im fine now but Im asleep, and all to soon Ill have to wake, to live another day in hell, another day crested with pain. Just a few years and Im ready to go.
My friendships are all gone, maybe they left long ago. Love, Ive never known her I guess I shouldnt plan on a visit. I dont have to long left, I make sure of that. Its a suicide by cigarettes, a suicide by alcohol, a suicide by depression, a suicide by broken heart.
My souls already dead, Im just an empty shell walking in a self-created hell.
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Re: Invisioned Happiness
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by Spike on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 09:00:52 PM AEST
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Plus you can't spell - hopeless! (lol).
Seriously, now, this certainly resonates with me - we've all worn this cloak of darkness, some till it is threadbare, and I've been feeling some of this lately and for too long. But if you can be fine in sleep, than you can be fine in part of the waking world too. Little by little, friend...
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Re: Invisioned Happiness
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 02:59:35 AM AEST
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this is very short but very powerful.. great expression here.. very well penned
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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