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Life That Carbon Copy Of Death . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 08:45:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Life,
that carbon copy of death
which in turn is but a fool's folly,
a playwright's form of entertainment
of orgazmic preportions, thrusting one
into a masterbatory frenzie in which
of course the solo participant
need not audition for
such a role of
distinction,
do they
now?
And
when did this preoccupation
so illustriously infest the amygdula
of some one called jesus christ, who
took it upon himself inducing all mankind
to partaicipate in a journey known as
love, ahh!, that crem de la crem of
all illusion if ever there was
one.
And so life,
now had an excuse.
to spew unto an unsuspecting world
which in turn spewd back on an unsuspecting
species.
A species still in denial
of where it realy come's from,
and yet is a willing participant
in the prepetualazation of a
nonparisant pac with
it's self,
some what like the elated playwright
and all those who preseed him in there quest
to assertain a better grip on life by merely impregnating
there obsessive thirst for a better hold on one's
self.
Who
can we love
if not our selves
certainly not each
other,
A
lover? a friend? is it not all pretend?
i mean what the hell's in a
name,
darwins evolution
jesus christ creation
are they both not one in the
same.
Life,
that carbon copy of death
from whence has cometh this
lie?
that's start's with a slap that engages in war
and end with a sexual
sigggggggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
H.
Ben
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2007-07-30 08:45:54]
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Re: Life That Carbon Copy Of Death . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 03:01:51 AM AEST
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wow this is simply amazing.. very dark but very passionate as well.. wonderful job here as usual from you.. you can pen out some very nicely written dark stuff as well as the romantic and dedication to your wife. very exquisite..
Rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Life That Carbon Copy Of Death . . . Ben
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by Adreana on
Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 06:33:14 AM AEST
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| I love the style of this one!! :) Fabulous work! |
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Re: Life That Carbon Copy Of Death . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 02:05:06 AM AEST
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deeply thought provoking and well written, it is wonderful to learn of the inner workings of such a fine poets mind:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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