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Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
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Hollow tears hide in eyes too haunted to cry
You’re so beautiful, but I’m so broken inside
I gave it everything, and now there’s nothing left
I can’t hide
Fading memories of promised realities I once had
Fighting to regain the magick I used to have
But I know, deep down, the battles over – I lost, you won
Please understand
I’m so scared of all this and I’ve fallen too low
I’m too tired to live; my wings are beating too slow
Take off my halo – it’s too special for me
Your angel’s got to go
So next time I scream into the wind, rain beating down,
Don’t try to save me, you’re not strong enough for this
Weak, unworthy of help, I deserve to drown
Let me go, let me taste the devil’s kiss
Choking on my tears, wishing the hurt would fade
I would trade my life for one moment without pain
And I’m so sorry, I don’t know how to try
I feel so sad and empty inside
Kick me down, tear off my disguise,
Close your beautiful eyes,
I can’t hide
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:42:06 AM AEST
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This is incredible. You did an amazing job writing this! The first line really caught my attention, and after the second line I was hooked. Awesome job!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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by Tanna on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 09:21:23 AM AEST
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| Nothing special??? This is AWESOME! |
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 02:19:51 PM AEST
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Wow... Lucie this kicked ass I love your poems your heart its so beautiful. This was absolutely amazing. I can feel the pain in this. This was awesome thnx for sharing this.
Your friend,
Joel |
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:12:28 PM AEST
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| always your poems are such a striking read, and you do it here again |
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:20:57 PM AEST
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| i loved this, this is so lovely, i hope you feel better now, huggs always nessa |
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 05:52:14 PM AEST
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| truly amazing poem... i can see the words and feel the pain... blessings... |
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