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Gothic Chandler . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 07:27:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Be
damned these false inemnities
that come with love in vain,
a troll who gravel's on his knees
a splinter in your
grain.
A
wilted leave on dying trees
amidst the forest gloom,
an empty shell where whoers dwell
in there whoer master's
tomb.
Thank you mother
for a life
that had no place for love,
an empty heart that would impart
what nightmares are made
of.
Your little boy is now a toy
who reap's the things
you sowed,
the handsom prince
you once convinced is but an ugly
toad.
Aye
'tis gothic chandler
recipiant of your spell,
a vagabond who went beyond
aliviating
hell.
Who
now must pay the piper
as he wallow's in the mud,
slurping from your holy grail
a cocktail of my
blood.
Here's 2 u w/ love so true your son,
Hannabal Lector
Ben
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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2007-07-30 07:27:55]
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Re: Gothic Chandler . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 08:32:45 AM AEST
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What a great write Ben....so perfect for the sign off of Hannabal Lector.
I caught the movie and it was fantastic...way to go...magnifique. |
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Re: Gothic Chandler . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 11:44:25 PM AEST
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Well this tale just gets ever more intriguing (and thanks for the PM to let me know!).
What a legacy!
Wonderful dark descriptions too!
Dom |
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Re: Gothic Chandler . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 03:07:39 AM AEST
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very eloquently written!! awesome job here
rock on,
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Gothic Chandler . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 02:24:12 AM AEST
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yuesh! he is a creepy guy lol!
love n' hugs nessa |
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