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Always Remain
Contributed by
mjh0813
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Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 01:46:21 AM in AEST
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let me take a trip down memory lane
and look back on all the pain
you were here
but now your gone
i think about you from dusk till dawn
you made me mad
you made me sad
i miss everything
the good and the bad
you were there for me
and i was there for you
in your eyes, there was nothing i couldnt do
your in the heavens above
the angel that i love
if for only a moment i could hold you in my arms
id take in all your charm
just like the earth needs rain
in my heart you will always remain
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2007-07-30 01:46:21]
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Re: Always Remain
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by yackerz85 on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 03:45:04 AM AEST
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Tragically beautiful, your poem almost moved me to tears. I can only imagine the hardships your going through, but I am real glad you shared this poem.
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Re: Always Remain
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 05:12:51 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss.
this is very sad but well written.
Hope you feel better really soon.
huggs,
emy |
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